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Alicia's avatar

It's off to a jaw dropping start! Can't wait to see where this goes... I think. 🤣

Bryan Wiler's avatar

I hate feet, Chris. this is not good. by "this" I mean a foot being the focal point of the story, not the story itself. THAT part is good. damn it. yes, I'll read part 2 and each part thereafter. but I might not enjoy it.

Konstantin Carambelas's avatar

"We want to believe that if we do the right things with our lives, we get to live to a ripe old age and die peacefully in our sleep."

This kind of fatalism reminds me of the Lemony Snicket narration, so much. Yes, that is a children's series, but still, so eerily similar.

Great start!

Aaron Martinez's avatar

To be continued?!?! I’m itching to read the rest!